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Disbelief. Part Twenty Nine

author: Colohue date: 07/01/2009 category: fiction
rating: 9.6 / votes: 18 
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 08:34 am
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 28 
 comments posted
Sound Mind :
nice man, this is getting really good.
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 08:55 am / quote |
Deep*Kick :
mmm battle!!! :liplick:
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 09:27 am / quote |
DesertEagle :
nice work sounds kickass
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 09:36 am / quote |
Ripping Corpse :
Awesome, only complaint is that we have to wait until next week to read on!
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 10:03 am / quote |
blommen :
oh an axe battle!!! the next ep. will be the greatest one everxD
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 10:06 am / quote |
metalonastrat :
go ed, melt his face off!
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 10:23 am / quote |
parathy_r :
Oh ****, this is going to be awesome!
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 10:37 am / quote |
demitriv :
Its a day late, and you left us with such a cliff hanger, but otherwise its getting better and better.
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 10:49 am / quote |
 
 m 
  :
I am still yet to miss a deadline, something messed up in the process, but it was very much done.

Check my profile for a piece of back story on Edgar Finn.

POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 10:55 am / quote |
Jango22 :
Yaaay! Awesome chapter yet again. Definitely stepped up the last few chapters. 10/10
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 12:14 pm / quote |
23dannybhoy23 :
Epic battle!
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 12:19 pm / quote |
 
 m 
  :
I should point out that I think this piece was absolutely terrible. I didn't like it at all, I think it's some of the worst I've ever written.
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 12:24 pm / quote |
Natrone :
It's setting up for an epic battle though. All is well good man
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 01:23 pm / quote |
joseruntalan :
o.o battleeeee! yesss
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 01:27 pm / quote |
TromboneThunder :
GODAMMIT MAN, HOW MANY CLIFFHANGERS CAN YOU INFLICT UPON US? HOW MANY‽
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 01:56 pm / quote |
guitard00d13 :
GAHHH JUST LET US KNOWW AHHH i agree with ^^^ good job though(y)
POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 02:25 pm / quote |
CG138 :
Colohue wrote:
I should point out that I think this piece was absolutely terrible. I didn't like it at all, I think it's some of the worst I've ever written.


I just think Paul doesn't know when to shut the **** up!

When a woman tells you they don't need looking after, leave them. They always come back.

POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 04:48 pm / quote |
Pannenkoeken :
I should point out that I think this piece was absolutely terrible. I didn't like it at all, I think it's some of the worst I've ever written.


I think you've written worse, though the thought of a guitar battle seems a tad silly. I honestly didn't care for this one, but overall, I think your writing has improved.

POSTED: 07/01/2009 - 07:10 pm / quote |
pandora_grunt :
I think you've written worse, though the thought of a guitar battle seems a tad silly. I honestly didn't care for this one, but overall, I think your writing has improved.


Rick Ash is a douche, so a guitar battle would be in place in my opinion.

And colohue, this is defintaley not your worst, but Pauls dialogue with Ally was a bit chaoticly written.

POSTED: 07/02/2009 - 04:26 am / quote |
FretboardToAsh :
Once again another cliffhanger, seems nice.
POSTED: 07/02/2009 - 05:10 am / quote |
 
 m 
  :
Actually I can pretty much guarantee from personal experience that chaotic dialogue fits perfectly with the situation.
POSTED: 07/02/2009 - 09:20 am / quote |
Vabolo :
I can just imagine Jace's laughter like that of a stereotypical, seven-foot tall, bearded russian man.
POSTED: 07/02/2009 - 06:57 pm / quote |
tragorious :
i knew it would come to this haha. ed's gonna smash him

nice work mate .

POSTED: 07/02/2009 - 09:27 pm / quote |
CG138 :
Just remember to write Ralph Macchio into the guitar duel.
POSTED: 07/03/2009 - 02:52 am / quote |
The Tak :
i love this, ive never actually been as captivated by a story on ug as i am by your stories colohue, thank you and keep it up.
POSTED: 07/05/2009 - 08:43 am / quote |
Travesty_Prone :
Vabolo wrote:

I can just imagine Jace's laughter like that of a stereotypical, seven-foot tall, bearded russian man.


seriously, i thought i was the only one!

but, this battle is gonna be somethin else, i can tell!

POSTED: 07/06/2009 - 03:50 am / quote |
shreddyboy :
i have been enjoying this story for a while now. you should try to get it published!
POSTED: 07/06/2009 - 04:18 pm / quote |
purge0809 :
nice... a set-up for a battle!!!
POSTED: 07/07/2009 - 05:56 am / quote |
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