New song: Metal/Progressive (GP4, GP5, Midi) C4C

[PinkIsCool]

This is a song I've been working on for a little over a week that I REALLY like. It's definitely heavier than my last one, and it's very Between the Buried and Me influenced, because that's all I've been listening to lately. :D This one's also pretty short, about 3:15 or so. There's a lot packed into it though. Anyway, tell me what you think and I'll drop you a crit back.

[XxRustInPeacexX]

wow man, thats great!

[metallica144]

wow man =O that's some really kick ass ****! i really liked that =P

[PinkIsCool]

wow man, thats great!
Well thank you! :D

[SatanicShredder]

That was good. I would change the intro a little to make it less repetitive, but with vocals that would probably be fine. It seems pretty similar until 65, that sweet "southern" riff which I like alot. It fits with the song but goes in a new direction and transitions well.

I actually thought the next part was kinda cheesy though until 92 when the BTBAM influence really starts to shine through, that was well done. The breakdownish part at 127 was cool, up to another southern sounding part which held the song together. The main riff reintroduction was kinda shaky, but it ended well.

Overall, a solid 8/10.

Crit please?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1188801