Crit PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[phpn00bf4life]

Crit For Crit


Intro:
Bass:
g:9---9---9---------------------------
d:--7---9---7-9-7---------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------


Rythem Guitar Hops In:
E(x4)
Bass:
g:9---9---9---9-----------------------
d:--7---7---7---7---------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------
Am(x4)
Bass:
g:------------------------------------
d:7-9-7-9-----------------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------
C#(x2)
g:9---9-------------------------------
d:--9---9-----------------------------
a:------------------------------------
e:------------------------------------

!~~--------GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~!

Verse:
E Am Bm
e:------------------|------------------|------------------
b:--7----5----------|------------------|------------------
g:9---7-------------|--5---------------|----7-------------
d:------------------|7---5-5-9---------|-9----7-7-9-------
a:------------------|------------------|------------------
e:------------------|------------------|------------------

Chorus:
E Am Bm C#
e:------------------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
b:----7-5-7-5-------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
g:--4---------------|------------------|------------------|--------------------
d:2-----------------|------------------|---6-9------------|11----9-8-9-8-6-----
a:------------------|---7--------------|-4----------------|---11---------------
e:------------------|-5----------------|------------------|--------------------

!~~--------END GUITAR 1 RIFFS--------~~!

!~~--------BASS RIFFS--------~~!

C# Am Bm E
g:|9----|----|--7-|9---|
d:|--9--|7-9-|9---|--7-|
a:|-----|----|----|----|
e:|-----|----|----|----|

!~~--------END BASS RIFFS--------~~!


E
When school is done,
Am
I'm just gonna have fun,
Bm
Me with you tonight
E
It's so alright
Am
Let's hold true to love [ -- Hold Love till 6th syallable-- ]
Bm
With the summer above

E
Can't wait for summer days now
C#
Hold on too me as we go
Am Bm
We'll drive, we'll drive away

E
My klick and I
Am
Don't know why
Bm
I see me and you
E
Holding hands being true
Am
I can't wait for summer to come
Bm
I hope it last too long
Full Band: Ohhhhh

E
Can't wait for summer days now
C#
Hold on too me as we go
Am Bm
We'll drive, we'll drive away



Outro:

We'll drive so far

We'll drive so far (Full band comes in after 2nd time, repeat to fade)


It's got lyrics mixed into! I'd like to know what you think?

[HazeD]

id have to hear it, i have no idea what your flow is. you didnt add a tempo. sorry man, nice tabbing thou

[HazeD]

from what im seeing, your not matchin your notes. the verse when in the key of E, what ur playing isnt in E it goes from A to D 4x.

[phpn00bf4life]

HuH.

K no0b question:

What would be in the key of E? Help explain how to determine what is in key of a certain note? I tried to stay in key but I guess I didn't.

[HazeD]

its aight man, i hope it doesnt sound like im coming down on you lol. there are scales you should learn to stay in key. see your 1st part thats in E 4x. the notes your playing arent going to match the E ur rhthm guitar plays. just goto google or yahoo and type bass scales, and find a scale that u feel comfortable with and check out the key of e

[phpn00bf4life]

Okay thanks!

[S2-GreenDay-S2]

The lyrics suck, but the guitar part is okay.