Dream Evil Inspired Riff

[Shred_Manifesto]

I was dickin' around a few minutes ago on my guitar, and came up with this neat little riff, just wanna know if any of you think it sounds good....


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|--2-2-2-5---2-2-2-7---2-2-2-5--2-2--7-9-10-9-7-12-
|--0-0-0-3---0-0-0-5---0-0-0-3--0-0--5-7--8-7-5-10-
* * * * * * * * * * *

After you play that 2 or 3 times play?


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|--------5-------7-------5-
|--00000-3-00000-5-00000-3-
***** ***** *****

also, any ideas that you think i could add on would help to

[legions]

uhmmm... you could add lead parts... in between some of those power chords...
besides that it's really simple and quite n00bish haha. fo reals though.

[Shred_Manifesto]

well im better at writin' melody's, leads, and solo type stuff, just wanted get some oppinions on this riff, i know it aint the greatest, but i think i can work from it,
And goddamn it does sound noobish, i never realized that, oh well