[GP4][MIDI] Thrash metal type song

[anti-punk]

Hey heres the start of a song ive been working on. Theres an intro and a verse riff. I don't play drums so they're not that great. Please give me your opinions.

[stevo192]

that sounds just like any other thrash metal song. Develop your own style dude, its just boring to hear the same sort of thing over and over again

[Polkman]

I quite liked how it built up but the main riff kinda sounds like battery by metallica.

[Polkman]

i just relistened and it sounds a lot like battery.

[Stagg_300]

u should think about copyright before posting it like that publicly, cuz dude it sounds awsome (although if it longer and with lyrics would be better, try to develope it a bit)

[saddam]

i thought it was quite boring, and the beginning clean part reminded me of stainds 'outside' god knows why :). try to make it more original man...


please check mine :

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=319320

[anti-punk]

Hey ive finished the song. I tried to make it more 'original' but i think ive kinda strayed from the thrash metal thing i was going for so i dont really like it. Im actually a bass player so the guitar solo in the song will make you cringe..

Polkman i dont think it sounds like battery by metallica really, however the verse riff reminds me of seek and destroy.

Well anyway crit would be appreciated, thanks to anyone who posted before

[White_Riot_1977]

I really like the song. I don't see why people are saying it sounds just like every other thrash metal song. I there's not much room for change in that genre. No offence:P. anyways I like it. To improve I would suggest adding harmony on the guitar solo. Trivium sorta stuff.

Could you check out mine please? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=4940055

[PsychoFreak]

Seek and Destroy verse hmph. Can't really call it thrash, it's not exactly fast :P

Come up with something more original