Cerulean Skies[Powertab]

[DarkSonata]

Here is something I finished up today. I've been listening to a lot of power metal lately, especially Sonata Arctica so I guess thats where the style came from. Another piece from me with piano and guitar, tell me what you think.

[chocolatguitar]

it made me dance.


very nice.

[slash_620]

it made me dance.


You must be quite a dancer...

Line 41 was the only bit of it i didn't like.

Awesome man,just awesome,guitar and piano,who'd a thought it!it's brilliant,i might put it on the list.

[pinion18]

It's great, my only problem is too many repeats in some spots. Like at the beginning, might want to change that to repeat twice. and some other parts that are a little repetitive. I really like this one, as I have your others. I really like the piano parts you come up with. Some advice I would give you would be to come up with some guitar parts that aren't all power chords, have it battle with the piano. I think that would make it really amazing. Wonderful piece.

Once again> http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=321637

[badnflunz]

dude
that kicked ass

[hthedinga]

Pretty rad. Power metal rules.
The Bad:
-Too many eighth notes (not enough rhythm)
-Too many repeats (too repetative)
I'd recommend looking at the big picture and figuring out a better flow for the song and a grander organization.
That said, you've got some good ideas in there and some transitions I like. There are too many 4 chord progressions though. It doesn't help that most of them are repeated. The solo really helped to break that up. I like some sudden changes, but it seems like every change in here is sudden. Definately some catchy riffs there. Nice work.

[Night_Lights]

a bit repitative, less repeats plz. other than that, kickass