[PT] 2 min instrumental *will return crit*

[Gman400]

Just wrote this now. The only thing is I would repeat the riff on the low E string for a while and the ending would probly be me and my band soloing over it (or maybe something else.)

Crit is much appreciated and will be returned. Thanks.

[druz15_UG]

U need to learn to write scores properly (e.g keeping each measure in 4/4 time) it makes writing music so much easier. otherwise great song

[Gman400]

Yeah I shoulda mentioned that. The setup of the staffs are poor and I'm not completely sure if the intro is correct timing but it's as close as I could get it lol. Thanks for the feedback.

[druz15_UG]

Most of it's reasonably accurate xcept for the last part which has got like 3 semibreves in the bar and another thats a bit out

[hthedinga]

my main complaint would be the repetativeness of the song. the section with everything being repeated 3 times was a little much for me. the 3 whole notes seemed to last too long, but maybe they'd sound better with the decay of an actual guitar. this song would be better with multiple parts. that would be my main recommendation for improvement besides the repetativeness. you might think a little more about rhythm too because there's very little in this song.

it'd be cool if you critiqued this song of mine because no one has yet:
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=338085

check out the songs in my signature too; they're better.

[HumanitysDeath]

I think you definately need some rhythm guitar in here.
The leads are great, but they sound empty.
Put some chords in there and it'll sound full.

Crit mine, first link in my signature.

[AAA_the_band]

hmmmm, not much more for me to say...yeah, the leads sound a little bland, but you can patch that up easy enough, and it is a little repetitive, but otherwise, good song


mines in the sig

[BeatleLover1029]

I thought it was good but as others said before me, the repetitiveness (lol cant spell) gets very...well repetitive! But otherwise as long as when you actually play it it sounds good to you, then by all means go ahead. I can't tell you if its hard to play or not, because well, I suck at guitar.

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[aaronni]

It was pretty good, some nice riffs. I liked it for a while but then it started to get very repetitive. To be honest when you repeat a couple of bars 4-5 times its a bit much. I think you need to add an interlude or something in the middle. And sort out the bars which repeat too often. Just needs a few touches and it should be pretty good. Also regarding the actual theory. I suggest using this button below. Easiest way to check accuracy.
http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b18/aaronni/untitled.jpg
Also can you check out mine? They're in the sig, thanks

EDIT: Sorry the pic didnt come out very well. The button Im talking a is a staff with a tick. You probably know it anyway

[Paint]

a nice solid rhythm guitar would help this sound so much better and more full.

GET TO IT!

jk

but ya, very neo classical-ish

[Metalxhed89]

Parts reminded me of "Last Resort" by Papa Roach. I like it. As stated it needs some background chords to fill in the background. I liked 27 alot.

If you get a chance could you crit mine (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=5368110)

[evil empire]

It was good, but it was pretty repetitive at some parts, try adding some chords behind the leads and add some more variety. You should also try to make the ending alittle better

[TheDarkestNights]

Excellent lead guitar and ... no rythm. Like others have said, this is a good lead part, except for a) the repetitiveness and b) the lack of rythm guitars and basses. Nonetheless a good piece of work and you can now add some bass and rythm guitar.

Crit mine? Link's in sig.