First Song I've Written [PTAB]

[calnix]

This is my first attempt at writing a song, let me know what ya think. Thanks.

[Noosie]

i really liked it nice and melodic sounds kinda majestic to me in a sense. id make it some kind of balladish song good job on it :)

[spike101]

Yeah that was nice! And it was rather original aswell, very good expecially for a first song, can you crit mine too please? Its also my first effort

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=367519

[82Camaro355]

Very good for a first. It sounds a lot different than anything I have heard in a while and, that's not a bad thing. Great job!

Check out my first and let me know what you think please.
http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=370179

[calnix]

Thanks for the comments, and I left my thoughts on y'alls songs. By the way, if ya want to hear the song, I recorded it. You can get to it through my sig. Its called Original #1.

[afortuneinlies]

wow...i was expecting some dissonant chordy things with measures ended in the wrong place and what not...but that was really good. especially for a first song, i wish my first song had sounded that good. keep it up. and mine are in my sig.

[Pure_Morning]

The fingerpicked part I felt was beautiful, but I wasn't keen on the strummed chords part in powertab. However it sounds great in your recording. Great job, I love it. :D

[MadMudgeN]

I like it alot dude. That's incredibly good for a first piece, especially since I kind of had the same attitude as afortuneinlies coming into it. Crit mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=370434