new one. metal? (GP5, GP4,MIDI)

[kylendm]

Idk something i made up today. Not near finished its just ideas. *updated*

['StoleN']

Most of the riffs were pretty generic so you might wanna work on that. All lot of the chord progressions were really boring. I liked the little outro thing at the end but it didnt really fit. You might want to add some drums it would sound loads better.

[kylendm]

Well i tried to make the part after the into more like energetic but i may be too much idk. i got rid of some parts so its like extra short too.

[Jonjy2]

Well...

It's quite a bit simple to be called metal (no offense). I did download both versions and I actually think you did go a little bit far with the second one. You had three guitars all playing different things. I would suggest harmonizing some parts. That would sound cool.

As stated before the riffs were kinda boring. The progression has been done by everyone...(including me :D)

It wasn't my favorite.

Sry if I sounded like a d*ck. But I'm just trying to help...:cheers:

Plz crit my latest in sig...thx

[British_Steal]

Hmmm

well i wouldn't really call it metal, too happy I guess

Also this is kinda boring and repetative and a tad bit lame. Listen too it again, I'm sure you'll agree

anyway, I think you should scrap this and start over fresh with a totally different theme in mind.

good luck

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