New Death Metal[GP5, GP4,MIDI]

[Logan21]

I just finished this after about 1 hours worth of work, not a masterpeice but its not too bad imo, anyways as always crit for crit(C4C)

Logan21

[metalmaster1991]

I like it, the intro sounds good. The riffs sound good but a little bit repetative, would be better if you added more variation. Overall a good song.
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[SatanicShredder]

I really liked the feel of the whole song, the longer notes made the main riff feel sweet. Also somehow the music just fits the title perfectly, it's hard to explain.


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[Its_Rock77]

wow, I loved every second of this. :D since I can't really tell you anything wrong with it I'll just give some suggestions to make it even better IMO :p:

when the drums have snare hits, it kinda sounded like clapping. IMO, if you ever record this or even just in GP put in handclaps there cause it sounded really cool like that.

you use a gunshot I think in one of the riffs and it sounded really awesome. I think you should have used that more often than just once.

the last quarter note was too long. I think an eighth or even a sixteenth would sound better.

other than those suggestions, I couldn't find anything wrong with guitar bass or drums. also, mixing for GP was awesome. sounded very "songlike" :p:

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[169290]

i gotta say i do like the riff in bar 7 on woulds very nice!
my only suggestions would be the solo type bit to much of the same thing put some more stuff inthere other than that 5/5!

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