[PTAB] Happy catchy tune[C4C]


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02-03-2009, 11:46 PM
Hi, this is my newest song. Don't know what genre it is. All I know is that it's a Happy catchy tune. :)

Hope you like it.

Crit4Crit :D

Seth Shadows
02-04-2009, 01:57 AM
Sickkkk for listening.
bad for notation.
Good job.

Butt Rayge
02-04-2009, 03:34 AM
I like it a lot. Some bits are bit unusual, but overall it's just a catchy pop song.

02-07-2009, 01:46 AM
Unlike my song, this is really good, I think you have done a really nice job with it, it sounds sooo catchy, I have listened to it three or four times already. =] Nice work 10/10

02-07-2009, 05:17 PM
Holy jeeblez. You are a mastermind. I can't find any thing to really give advice on. That was amazing. It's like...10/10. Thanks for the crit, too.

02-08-2009, 04:51 PM
Hey man, thanks for critting my song.

critting al i listen

Ok, i love a good pop song and this is great. exellent intro with the bass. im thinking you have a piano play that gutair hit on 0:06. just piano and guitar playing together to make it more interesting with be amazing. love that riff man, im hearing plently of blues. great chords. omfg, this solo is so sweet (around 1:40). i cant really crit sections cause its only on midi. but seriously dude. you have written a winer. ten out of ten.

02-12-2009, 04:49 PM
Hey thanks for the crits, I'm glad you guys liked it.

02-13-2009, 03:04 AM
Wow, i certainly did enjoy it :D

Infact, im trying to play some of it now :P

02-22-2009, 12:32 AM
Holy happy! The song instantly put me in a good mood. This is a great little number you have going on. I would love to see a final recorded version if it. It sounds kind of like a softer, happier, early 90s Radiohead. But, Yeah, it was well written and everything flowed nicely

02-22-2009, 01:48 PM
Hey man, thanks for the crit on Your's Sincerely!

This is a pretty nice tune here. Nice work, no bum notes as far as I can tell. Love the use of the bass. 9/10

02-23-2009, 11:07 PM
Thanks for the crit.

Awesome song you've got here. I really enjoyed listening to it. Great melodies, loved the bass line, and the way the guitars complemented each other.

I really wish I had more to offer you here. But all I can really say is how much I enjoyed listening :)

04-21-2009, 09:43 PM
Holy **** I got a boner from joy when listening to this. This is like the acoustic version of a cliffs of dover if cliffs of dover wasn't cliche of course. 9/10 Title of this song = God give your ears sensual massage 5 dora?
Crit mine? its post hardcore I just added a new lead

04-21-2009, 09:56 PM
Jesus, you never cease to amaze me. Chiclets was an audible orgasm, Boston Inspired and Pull Of were both almost as great, and this is... I believe the first acoustic thing I've heard from you, and I love it. Just like the other songs it makes me want to get up and do a backflip. Of course, I won't. The notation isn't good, but the listening, like someone up there said, is great.

10 outta freakin' 10.

Crit mine? Either What's With You or Duty Calls in the sig.

EDIT: I lied; I remember listening to Caustic Acoustic. But regardless.