My first song, vaguely metal, critique? (.ptb)


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NinjaLamppost
02-07-2009, 06:04 PM
Hey everyone, been writing this over the past couple of weeks for my music coursework, im pretty happy with it, but would love some critique. Some stuff sounds sooo much better on an actual guitar, and I haven't finished the solo, but please tell me what you think, and any tips on how to improve it. :peace:

NL

oggiedoggy
02-07-2009, 06:24 PM
Overall seems a bit choppy. Idk how stuff works in Powertab but in the part where you have the artificial harmonics on the last note (verse?) I changed the artificial harmonic to a semi harmonic and changed the fret to 12th. A little vibrato there would liven things up as well. Maybe put in a "voice instrument" and some drums. Best of luck to ya.