This Apocalypse [Metal] [*.gp5|*.gp4|*.mid]


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defiance64
02-14-2009, 11:36 AM
To comply with the rules, I had to wait a whole 24 hours before posting another song lol, second song this week, so now I have to wait like 6 more days, but anyway here is another song "This Apocalypse"!

Crit4Crit

wheatmore
02-14-2009, 11:50 AM
i like it

henkka_potku
02-14-2009, 01:23 PM
It's pretty good but it isn't too interesting (g-g#-g-g#-g-g#-g-g#-...)

Zeroxk
02-14-2009, 09:23 PM
Liked the drums and the overall song, but not the shreddy parts of the solo and the fact that there's a lot of repetition in the riffs.

Seth Shadows
02-15-2009, 01:24 AM
Ouch.
No thanks.
The drums were absolutly terrible.
The guitar was boring.
The riffs were way, way too simple.
None of the solo fit.
The right channel-ness kinda blew chunks, too.

What the fuck with the bridge?
But, it's better then alot of the stuff in here.

Work on it, bro.

RiseAgainstScum
02-15-2009, 10:32 AM
I liked the riffs; however the repetition is killing me. Adding one or two more riffs would really help imo.

You could also add bends, slides, etc. to the solo. The way it is now sounds too plain.

The "shred" part of the solo doesn't really fit with the rhythm.

I'd appreciate if you commented on my song ^_^ http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1068494

meanmrmustad
02-15-2009, 11:28 AM
Not Metal :P