Bass Featuring Thing/Tool Inspired (GP5, GP4, MIDI)


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monkeysintheday
02-15-2009, 09:19 PM
Not even close to finished, wanted to get UG's imput.
The lyrics are about hair in French Fries, but I don't have a copy right now.

creeping.death!
02-15-2009, 11:16 PM
The intro was excellent. The bass is outstanding, I really liked it. The guitar complements it very well.
The main riff part is not bad, but it doesn't seem to flow too well. I think it's because of the drums; the same part in the verse with the different drum pattern sounded much better imo.
Pre-chorus was okay. Again, the bass is really good here.

PM me when it's done and I'll give you a full crit.

If you wanna C4C, check either ZOMBIES! or Catharsis (both in my sig)

Streetking07
02-22-2009, 05:50 PM
some of it is good but it gets kind of repetitive

AngrySockMonkey
02-22-2009, 06:29 PM
Thats pretty sweet IMO. I really like the time signatures, though I think you could make the drums a bit better so it flows. Pre-Chorus is my favourite riff :p.

Good job unfinished so not giving you an x/10

C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1073295

kane2882
02-23-2009, 06:50 PM
Some really nice bass in there man, this should be a really good song when it's finished. I especially enjoyed bars 1-8 and 26-29. IMO, the drums are theonly real weak point, they don't seem to fit particularly well. But the guitar is good as well. If you want to C4C, my song is on the front page :)