Beginning (GP4,GP3)


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02-19-2009, 05:47 PM
Crit this beginning to this song i am writing

02-21-2009, 02:52 PM
The Acoustic has some strange long notes, so at some parts it doesn't flow that well. I liked how the electric kicked in, sounds great, but you should add some bass too. keep working on it.

mind critting mine? (new one in sig) Thanks.