Alternative Rock/Metal [GP5, MIDI, PTB]


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george8392
02-20-2009, 02:10 PM
this song's got kind of an upbeat feel. i kinda wrote for the lead to shine through most of the song. this is probably most influenced by Bayside.

just let me know what you like and what you don't like.

(i didn't put drums in one part of the song in the GP version; just haven't that's all)

ctb
02-20-2009, 02:54 PM
Perfect. All the way through.

The 11th fret note on the A string didn't sound too good to me. That is all!

george8392
02-20-2009, 04:39 PM
Perfect. All the way through.

The 11th fret note on the A string didn't sound too good to me. That is all!

lol, i meant to take that out. but yea thanks. :D

rodrigomierh
02-20-2009, 05:45 PM
That was great. It kept me interested the whole time.

The solo was kind of bland, you could have done something more memorable.
The acoustic part after the solo was great. I liked the ending too.
Overall itw as a great song, Nice job.

Mind critting mine? (new one in sig) Thanks.

george8392
02-20-2009, 06:47 PM
That was great. It kept me interested the whole time.

The solo was kind of bland, you could have done something more memorable.
The acoustic part after the solo was great. I liked the ending too.
Overall itw as a great song, Nice job.

Mind critting mine? (new one in sig) Thanks.

haha, yea writing solos is new territory for me so i'll work on that. thanks for the crits, i'll hit up your song soon. :D

aceral1715
03-07-2009, 01:22 PM
Great song. Loved the bridge and solo. Really nice feel to it overall. Nice choice of chords. Liked the way the solo ended with the Gm6/A#. Planning on writting lyrics?

C4C?
'My Apocalypse' in the sig

Geiger89
03-07-2009, 02:52 PM
Liked it alot, flowed really nicely and wasn't generic. I liked the solo 'cause it wasn't hitting out as many notes as was possible, it seemed really well thought out. Good job.

george8392
03-07-2009, 04:27 PM
Great song. Loved the bridge and solo. Really nice feel to it overall. Nice choice of chords. Liked the way the solo ended with the Gm6/A#. Planning on writting lyrics?

C4C?
'My Apocalypse' in the sig

i started writing lyrics for it, but i just work on them some more. i'll probably put a vocal track in the GP version of the song.

thanks for the crits. :D

george8392
03-07-2009, 04:28 PM
Liked it alot, flowed really nicely and wasn't generic. I liked the solo 'cause it wasn't hitting out as many notes as was possible, it seemed really well thought out. Good job.

thank you very much.