Deathcore Ditty [GP5, GP4, MIDI] C4C?


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AngrySockMonkey
02-21-2009, 11:02 PM
New short Deathcore song that I recently finished.

Have an enjoy.

C4C possibly :peace:

Ploopx
02-22-2009, 01:34 AM
Damn, i know **** about deathcore so this comment will be mostly a bump but
That riff with the trmolo picking in the middle is wicked

xxCHANCExx
02-22-2009, 02:07 AM
Sounded really good. All the riffs were pretty friggin cool. I have to say though, the breakdown at the very end was beast. It just made me want to jump around, headband and punch a wall. Not much to say about it, there's nothing really "wrong" with it, but it could definitely be better. Kayboards were interesting. Intro riff was sweet too. The only part I have to say I didn't really like was verse 2/breakdown. When it went to 0's on the bottom two strings, it just sounded eh. But other than that it was a good song. Nothin SUPER amazing (except for that beast breakdown lol), but it was good. Great job. 8.5/10

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1072667

BlackandSilver
02-22-2009, 02:10 AM
Sweet, this is pretty nasty. 8/10 Nice **** here.


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AA00P
02-22-2009, 09:34 PM
There's something cinematic and epic about the breakdown in the middle with the synth and sweeps.

I love it.

Tom9106
02-23-2009, 09:05 AM
It was all good man.

had a really dark feel.

loved the breakdowns, the sweep -ish riffs, and the intro.

good stuff, crit back if you like :)

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1069964

Slaytanic1993
02-23-2009, 10:46 PM
It was pretty cool, but I'm not a huge fan of deathcore, so that may be me being biased :p:

The sweeps in the breakdown were a nice atmospheric addition, but the pedal point riffs were only a little okay. Nothing much else to note besides the outro riff being pretty nifty.

8.5/10

tpkemme
02-25-2009, 01:40 AM
despite the fact that i enjoy some deathcore, it seems listening to it in guitar pro drives me crazy.

so biases aside, i thought it was good but somewhat simple. I could totally see a standard deathcore band playing this song, but it doesn't have anything that really stands out from the many many many deathcore bands that exist. unless of course you get some good ole jig-ai vocals in there. hehe. that would be sweet though somewhat odd.

all the same i think it's a good composition, just somewhat standard

crit please:
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1075603