Unnamed song (GP5, GP4, MIDI) C4C


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aceral1715
02-27-2009, 08:39 AM
This song isn't really finished yet, but I wanted to get people's opinions of what i've done so far. It doesn't have lyrics or a melody so far but the basics of the song are finished.

GodofGuitar1991
02-27-2009, 08:46 AM
its really good and carries its own melody. but take off all the ringing in the brigde. maybe just have the top string ringing.

GodofGuitar1991
02-27-2009, 08:47 AM
and ill post one of my pieces in a sec. i need some crit

GodofGuitar1991
02-27-2009, 08:54 AM
this is supposed to have a random shreddy feel....

tukk04
02-27-2009, 09:10 AM
this is supposed to have a random shreddy feel....
that's one awesome song!
it makes me think of what it would sound like if Lamb Of God wrote a doom metal song

Rukasu Rindu
02-27-2009, 09:15 AM
Great, really great, but as GodofGuitar1991 said, remove the "ringing" in the Bridge section , made it all soud kinda messy.

aceral1715
02-27-2009, 09:19 AM
this is supposed to have a random shreddy feel....

Really nice song except that it gets kind of repetitive at times. It would prolly help to cut the number for repetitions for some of the riffs. Otherwise, some really catchy licks with drum beats that compliment the music. I would suggest adding a bass guitar which plays the same thing as the guitars most of the time. Not necessary, but i think it would sound good ;) Nice harmonies around bar 50+. Endings good, but maybe a bit more build up to the final held note? anyways, 8/10 :)

aceral1715
02-27-2009, 09:24 AM
its really good and carries its own melody. but take off all the ringing in the brigde. maybe just have the top string ringing.

Thanks. When i had the rse turned on, the guitar seemed really in the background so the ringing didnt really bother me, but when the rse was off it got to me too :P
Ive changed it and i took your advice and only left the bass note ringing.

GodofGuitar1991
02-27-2009, 02:14 PM
Thanks. When i had the rse turned on, the guitar seemed really in the background so the ringing didnt really bother me, but when the rse was off it got to me too :P
Ive changed it and i took your advice and only left the bass note ringing.


glad to help and thanks alot for you comments on my song :)

soundgarden1986
02-28-2009, 12:40 PM
I really like the verse riff. The drums could use some work in the chorus. I don't know what exactly about them bothers me though but they aren't bad so leaving them would be fine. All in all, I'd give it around an 8.5/10.

kylendm
03-02-2009, 02:18 PM
I liked that clean intro. The verse was pretty catchy i got to admit. The chorus was cool, i liked that part a bit. The breakbassdown was neat haha i liked it. Again a catchy a bridge. I really like the use of the bass in this song, it stands out compared to the other instruments. 8.5/10 :D