"Something" acoustic fingerpicking song. GP5 and GP4

[breakdown123]

so this is a little simple acoustic riff i wrote today after learning some basic fingerpicking stuff. its more about the melody then the technique. i have some basic lyrics written down.

i detect a difference in your laugh,
and i wonder is this going to become the past,
something different about your smile
something different about your laugh.

so critique?

[liam1107]

its a lovely melody and thats the end of that, just one of those melodies that gets you :)
well done :)

[aceral1715]

Its nice. The whole time i imagined another guitar playing the same thing twice as fast over the first one.

[breakdown123]

yeah, it was kidna just thrown into guitar pro really quickly after doing a basic recording.

the original demo had a solo on it lol, it kinda seemed out of place though.