New Song (metalcore GP5,Gp4, midi)
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06-29-2009, 01:32 PM
lots of killswitch engage influence here, i wrote it today in a very short space of time and i think its okay. C4C of course
06-29-2009, 06:54 PM
The intro is very generic and has been used in a LOT of other songs, sorry.
Verse 1 is better, but maybe you could change the rhythm of it a bit?
I didn't like the pre-chorus very much.
The Chorus is really cool! And the postchorus works well.
The breakdown was OK but the bridge was nicely done.
I think you need a longer outro!
Nice work with the drums.
I won't grade you on a scale from one to ten as it is impossible to grade music that way.
my song: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1153382
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