Progressive Intro (maybe not, have no idea) GP4/5/Midi


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CheesyMozarella
06-30-2009, 09:12 PM
Well, yeah, it's just an intro, alot of work remains. :)

Just tell me what you think.

Is it worth working on?

firetothemax
06-30-2009, 09:18 PM
Yes. Keep it up, but be wary of falling into cliché.

Progbass92
06-30-2009, 09:21 PM
I think the drums could use some improvements. They sound too much like they belong in a metalcore song instead of a prog song. I think the progression is really generic and could use some switching up in the first four measures too. Throw in some accidentals and make it more interesting. Keep it up though. I think it'll be great.
Good luck.
C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1153380

.starrk
06-30-2009, 09:37 PM
That sounded very... metalcore to me. While it did have an odd rhythm, that's about where the progressive part stopped. You are definitely trying, so keep on working on it. But at the moment, you have a fairly generic intro.

afterthewar
06-30-2009, 10:20 PM
Nice bass