Dead Storage (real grindcore) GP5/4/MID


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bloodshed344
07-01-2009, 07:11 AM
The name is not a reference to another song by me, it is a reference to a popular movie. I actually made this song before that other song.

C4C (but you must ask for it)

psyo
07-02-2009, 07:40 AM
intro riff 1-2 was cool, couldve lead into a very dissonant song or either way.

4-6 just for me it seemed a bit awkward and repetitive. I don't like that it goes in 3/4 for that one bar, it'd definately sound better with those mad grind vocals. But from a pure guitar perspective its a bit boring (it reminded me of a circus haha)

7-8 was cool aswell, but yeah very short, id probably throw maybe one or two variations of that in somewhere.
9-10 also much the same as 7-8, it couldve gone on a few bars longer. THe 6/4 bar was good.
11-14 is catchy with the bass + drums while the guitar doesnt play. I liked it.
15-30 also very catchy and it'd have a crowd going. Maybe throw in a diminished fifth instead of just a fourth on those higher notes.
33-35 back to that riff I didnt like hehe
36-38 kick ass ending.

So basically id say elaborate on the more grindy type riffs so they are just a little longer. Even though those riffs together are probably about the same length as the syncopated section, it seems like they are shorter and it feels a bit uneven. Find a better main riff and stretch it out a little. 15-30 was really memorable, good work.

keganonthedunes
07-23-2009, 10:34 PM
i liked it. it was like old grindcore but with elements of mathcore, like the odd timing. cool stuff

herman ri2
07-24-2009, 01:03 AM
tbh, I think that the name of the song is very unnecessary and disguising.

bloodshed344
07-24-2009, 02:33 PM
tbh, I think that the name of the song is very unnecessary and disguising.
tbh, I think you should watch Pulp Fiction :D

turtlewax
07-24-2009, 02:37 PM
Dead storage? When is that mentioned in Pulp Fiction...oh right...The dead.... storage area?

bloodshed344
07-24-2009, 02:41 PM
Dead storage? When is that mentioned in Pulp Fiction...oh right...The dead.... storage area?
Uhh, download the file... you'll see.

The part where Marvin gets shot in the face... Tarantino says his house doesn't have a sign out in front that says "dead ngr storage"

turtlewax
07-24-2009, 03:00 PM
yeah I know...I don't think its an appropiate title though, its just offensive to people who might not have seen the film "dead storage" is good though

ExplorerFreak
07-24-2009, 04:09 PM
People. It is grindcore. I think complaining about "appropriate" is a bit counter-productive to the genre's purpose and motives.

bloodshed344
07-24-2009, 04:39 PM
People. It is grindcore. I think complaining about "appropriate" is a bit counter-productive to the genre's purpose and motives.
Thank you :)

actaderock
07-24-2009, 05:46 PM
I don't like grindcore

Take a look at the one in my sig!

:headbang:

bloodshed344
07-25-2009, 05:34 PM
Take a look at the one in my sig!

:headbang:
I'm gonna report this post, but thanks for the two free bumps (your post and mine)