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thatwhiteguy69
07-07-2009, 08:48 PM
this is a work in progress. tell me what you guys think i could do with it

thatwhiteguy69
07-08-2009, 12:25 AM
oh cmon no one can say anything

Msu_Man04
07-08-2009, 09:46 PM
Well I was going to, but since you're too impatient to wait, or too lazy to crit someone else's and politely ask them to crit yours in return, I strangely to not feel the urge to do so anymore.

P.S: Read the rules on bumping.

thatwhiteguy69
07-09-2009, 08:16 PM
where can i find the rules. sory im a ug n00b

Msu_Man04
07-09-2009, 09:17 PM
It's a topic right at the top of the list of topics.

CraZyB0y
07-09-2009, 10:31 PM
It was ok... Hard to give a real crit when there's only a handful of riffs strewn together with nothing but guitar. Maybe work on it some more and make a new thread? and be more polite?

jc349
07-09-2009, 11:30 PM
Its ok... Just just your everyday generic heavy metal attempt riff. Add drums, a good bassline and maybe a harmonized guitar and it would be alot better.

thatwhiteguy69
07-13-2009, 10:37 PM
ugh im too poor right now to buy gp

yes yes i know i=fail

jimmyled
07-14-2009, 03:58 AM
You should change the time signatures, because it sounds weird as it is now. Sounds like just some riffs together, work on the transition, add drums bass and rhythm, continue the song, and Crit Mine. (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1161997)