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creeping.death!
07-10-2009, 02:23 AM
I'd started to work on this piece a couple of months ago, and I had kinda forgotten it for a while, but a few days ago I decided to finish it, and so I did (although I'm still not fully satisfied with it).

Anyway, I'd appreciate some feedback. C4C of course :)

jbridge90
07-10-2009, 06:49 AM
As I'm listening, this just sounds awesome

In the beginning, the time sig. changes threw me off a bit, but I quickly began to see how you made it all work. My one negative comment in the beginning was that the same guitar part just repeated over and over, but when I saw how the piano/string/violen/etc., were REALLY the main focus of the piece, I started enjoying the orchestra feel you put up. Bars 81-98 were my favorite segments. It was awesome.

All in all, you seem to be a very talented writer. I would compare this to Trans-Siberian orchestra, because this song isn't really like anything I've heard. I'd definitely hold on to it :)

Now, if you could please go here and critique at least one of the three, I would be very appreciative

Demo cuts (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=20673195#post20673195)