Vagabond [gpro] crit4crit


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cham
07-11-2009, 07:16 PM
This is a song ive been working on. Its unfinished. The flute is the vocals and the lyrcis are writin above them. the lyrics are really meaningful to me its about a vision i have of a world without worries.
tell me what you think so far. and maybe some tips on the lyrics.

crit4crit

thanks!

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07-11-2009, 07:41 PM
the 'main riff' sounds a bit too much like sweet child 'o mine, imo. but that might just be me.