Short Metalcore Track [ GP4 - GP5 ]


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CarlosAlejandro
07-12-2009, 12:06 AM
Its another work, i make it today so check this out. Thats a shoort metalcore track.

I dont have so much time to write songs, so i do short stuffs like my other works..

Sorry i wont make the drums cus i cant really hear that, my Audio Card is bad .. x ]

So, check this out people; greats!

andrew12398
07-12-2009, 12:48 AM
It sounds way too familiar at about 7-10. It was alright though.

Try taking the tempo to about 120, it would sound better IMO.

CarlosAlejandro
07-12-2009, 01:02 AM
What you remenber in this bars? X ]

TooToughTrenton
07-12-2009, 02:53 AM
It sounds alright. Kind of generic. Okay song overall but it needs more on it so I can do a full review

In the meantime, check out my pop-core song that I wrote. I need some feedback on it :)

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=20698325#post20698325

CarlosAlejandro
07-12-2009, 10:13 AM
Thanks. Yep, so generic .. but its a simple metalcore short track, i like that so i would see to make more..

Okay, i wil check this out.

jimmyled
07-13-2009, 04:14 PM
Intro was great. Loved that Lead guitar. 7-10 though sounded strangely almost exactly like Unholy Confessions... 11-12 was nice, but the guitar was pretty annoying. 13-16 was a little generic. Outro was great too. Pretty short though...
C4C? (http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1161997)

andeen10
11-23-2009, 08:07 PM
i agree the tempo needs to be faster.
i like the outro, although i think it would be better for a breakdown instead