My yngwie malmsteen style song

[SoDisCooL2]

So, for the past few months Ive been studying the playing style of Yngwie Malmsteen, and wrote a song in his style while mixing in a few elements of my playing. I wrote it on guitar and made a guitar pro 5 file with it. Check it out, and tell me what you think of it. Thanks, its called gates of eternity.

[deaththrashcore]

It's kind of just senseless wankery... there's no sense of rhythm at all. Also, those time signature skips... there's durations other than 32nd notes you can use...

[awesomehamish]

I agree with the above

[Chikao42]

Post a video of you playing it.

[SoDisCooL2]

OK, I will eventually.

[Deep*Kick]

I don't say this often, but I would rather listen to malmsteen.

[salamander121]

Get a better understanding of time signatures and try again; only a few of those riffs seemed to fit :confused: .

[zezikaro]

I really don't know what to say.