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track122
10-12-2009, 12:15 AM
Track 2 of 11 from my album. Posting more as forum rules permit. And of course, C4C.

[Azrael]
10-12-2009, 03:42 PM
Pretty awesome mang

Victor V.
10-12-2009, 03:52 PM
Usually I will always say it is missing keyboards, but this time it really is.

I really liked the solos and all, but you need to work on the ambiance of the song. Maybe Strings, or Hapischord, with which you can even do a solo? Maybe an Organ?

Still, since it is from your band, I will suppose you don't have a keyboardist :(
Great work, though.

track122
10-12-2009, 04:13 PM
Thanks for the feedback. I don't really see myself writing anything with keyboard or harpsichord in it anytime soon, regardless of who's in my band. Maybe I could make up for that lack of ambient with a bass line, I have been pretty lazy with writing those :P.

Tom Araya
10-12-2009, 05:40 PM
Hmm...cool thrashy song, but too short :( I like the main riff, it's pretty simple but cool-sounding. Maybe you should add some more riff or maybe acoustic interlude? Crit mine? - http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1214741

NFXtreme
10-13-2009, 07:54 AM
I like it. It's pretty fast and aggressive, I think a bass line would seriously help the feel of the piece, though.