my first try at a song [GP5]


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plunkett
10-12-2009, 03:25 PM
i don't know it sounds fairly master of puppet-ey, i kinda like it. also my first try at harmonising, so i stuck to octaves.

it's not finished yet, the part that it ends on is i think the chorus right now.


it's based around the Eb harmonic Minor scale and it's in.... Eb.

[Azrael]
10-12-2009, 03:37 PM
Pretty cool mang

Tom Araya
10-12-2009, 05:34 PM
Not bad, not bad. You must add the drum track at least. Reminds me of Exodus a little 0_o

Crit mine? - http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1214741

21Fretter
10-12-2009, 05:56 PM
Not crazy about that lead right at the start.

+1 to adding a drum track.

plunkett
10-12-2009, 09:09 PM
thanks guys.

i'll add in some drums after the next band jam, i'll let the drummer make the part

Tomozaurus
10-13-2009, 03:15 AM
Pretty good first attempt.
Change the tapping in the intro. It doesn't fit. The riff from 35-42 was a little generic thrash-y but not too bad.

Overall, alright.

c4c?: http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1213800

octavarium78
10-13-2009, 05:36 AM
Hey man, pretty good first song. I was extremely bored for the past half hour so I decided to add drums to your song. Keep in mind, I barely learnt how to write drums on Guitar Pro a couple hours ago and i'm hooked haha. It's very fun :P

Well here it is, the cow bell at the end is for teh lulz.

EDIT: AH. I only have the demo version so it cut off at the 24th bar. All that work for nothing! haha Well if you want man ,I can send it to you in a .midi file :P

plunkett
10-14-2009, 01:40 AM
thanks for the crits guys!

i'll probably switch the tapping or something, and i'm reworking some of the song now.

but seriously thanks a ton

blackmagician
10-14-2009, 02:06 AM
the start was pretty ok, but i liked the way the song picked up after the tapping part. rest all seemed decent.
help crit mine?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1216197

herby190
10-15-2009, 08:25 PM
Could you post a GP4 version? Your version of GP5 is later than mine, so I can't open it.

plunkett
10-16-2009, 12:20 AM
sure can!

herby190
10-16-2009, 08:09 AM
It sounds a bit slow and dragging, but I think that has to do with not having a drum track. Overall, it's not incredible, but it's pretty good.

CrimsonBizzare
10-16-2009, 11:41 AM
Quite a solid chord progression, and got some nice riffs in there. Didn't like the tapping too much, and drumming is well needed.

Crit my riffs?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=21979623#post21979623