Fight (Thrash Metal) (GP5)


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RiseAgainstScum
10-13-2009, 12:49 PM
I finally finished writing the guitar parts for my new song, Fight. I tried to make it feel you like beating up people :D

Vocal lines to be done by vocal man and drums are to be done by drum man, so all I've got to do is the bassline.

dontbestupid47
10-13-2009, 01:44 PM
thanks for the crit!
in some parts it did feel like i was fighting people. I dont know if it was intentional or not, but at bar 33 on track 2 you ended the guitar on the G#, but the rest of the time you ended on that riff on the G, just wondering if that was a oops. i like when the solo busted into triplets, and good luck playing those sweeps lol. other than that, the transitions sounded a little rough but could probably be smoothed out with a drummer and some bass

Carl6661
10-13-2009, 03:12 PM
Ta' for the crit.

Overall, not bad. All the riffs seemed decent (Considering I would normally never listen to thrash), I loved those odd harmonys from bar 50. Could use drums and bass though.

6/10, if you like ratings. I would never listen to thrash, but this could be a good song, it's hard to tell without drums and bass though. :)