BTBAM Inspired Clean Intro [GP5, MIDI]


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Jarusafes
10-14-2009, 07:54 PM
Hey everybody, this is a little intro to a song I came up with and I was wondering if I should continue or if I should just trash it. All criticism welcome. Thanks.

DaddyTwoFoot
10-14-2009, 08:29 PM
The beginning of bar 11 is way too busy sounding. The lead and rhythm are fighting.

Altogether, though, not bad.

ch715dallat
10-15-2009, 08:19 PM
that was sick man, loved it

chexered
10-15-2009, 09:25 PM
man, that was amazing

if only my song was like that

but yeah, bars 11-15
did sound too busy

but i did like that 1/4 bar at the end
that tied it together nicely

C4C? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1216347