Judgement Day (not sure of genre) [MIDI]


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master69
10-15-2009, 08:49 PM
This is a song that i've recently been doing a lot of reworking on and have just recently got to an almost finished project

21Fretter
10-16-2009, 06:17 AM
That chorus, presuming it's the chorus, doesn't fit at all.

master69
10-16-2009, 09:02 AM
Which one? theres 3 lol if its that first one then ya im working on fixing that too

blackmagician
10-16-2009, 10:36 AM
rework more on the song i would say. there is no riff that is very memorable and the drums are well, Ok at the most. when you have put in two guitars, use them properly. bass seemed fine and your transition ( the 1st ) was abrupt, and the pinch harmonic doesnt fit in that well, use something lower. the 2nd riff is better than the first and the things get better there. but what was that? the chorus? it didnt fit in well mate. the solo part (tapping) was okay and i could hear some notes off scale, intentional? rest on seems decent
overall, can be made better and i give it 6.5/10
crit mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1216197

21Fretter
10-16-2009, 01:48 PM
Oh ja sorry, wasn't very specific :P The first one, it very pop-punky.

master69
10-16-2009, 04:22 PM
lol wasnt going for pop...i guess it will sound different once recorded...and a new chorus lol