[GP5/4] Projecta 25 (Punk/Alternative)


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herby190
10-15-2009, 11:58 PM
C4C.

I just wrote this all tonight; my late-night works always either fall into the category of my best or my worst, the problem being that I get so used to them that by morning, I can't even decide if I like it. Which is what you're here for. :D

As always, be honest, be harsh, and most of all, be constructive.

Tear it to shreds. :peace:

21Fretter
10-16-2009, 05:56 AM
You really need to move away from the 8th strumming rhythms. I think that's why your other piece (Project 23 i think) was very awesome. Just hearing a flurry of 8th's for the entire song starts to annoy me a bit.

Bar 40: i think you SHOULD use 8th notes for the A power chord (I'm serious though :P)

Everything else is fine sound wise but I didn't like it that much :\

NFXtreme
10-16-2009, 06:33 AM
Sounded pretty basic to me, definitely should try some different strumming patterns.