Look At The Ruins You've Created (GP5.2/4/MIDI)


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10-18-2009, 03:25 AM
Latest song for the upcomming project. it is very creepy

C4C as always

10-18-2009, 03:34 AM
Good stuff, man. Really enjoyed it. Intense.

10-18-2009, 03:37 AM
Quite epic for a MIDI file

10-18-2009, 03:37 AM
I can just imagine how awesome that would sound real.

10-18-2009, 03:41 AM
im about to run it through reason minus the guitar and bass so i can hear how epic the strings and brass sound :D

10-18-2009, 08:46 AM
i'm very impressed, that was epic as ****

10-26-2009, 09:00 PM
I've colabrated with a band mate and we have made a lot of changes. Will reupload soon

10-27-2009, 04:53 PM
WHHHOOAA! That's great! Bit more distrotion riffs.
Crit mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=22123859#post22123859

10-27-2009, 05:04 PM
sir, thats a great tune for sure, i really like it...do you have it recorded┐??
also, if you can help me, check out this:

10-28-2009, 03:54 PM
woow very heavy and epic sounding, great job man.

10-28-2009, 06:57 PM
Heavy, liked the start.
But the end seemed a bit messy tho, maybe it's just the midi. I should check it out when recorded with real effects and guitars, maybe then it will sound awesome instead.

10-29-2009, 03:16 AM
I want your babies. Your satanic, twisted, progressive babies.
This is very epic. I wish it would build up into a 20 minute epic. I wanted it to keep going. The blast beats were magical. Excellent touch. Timpanis in the beginning I loved. This whole thing was a pleasant surprise.

I'm srs, this is amazing.

I feel dirty asking you, but check mine out? It's a whole lot longer than this. lol.


10-29-2009, 05:03 AM
this is great orchestration! i love it...
epicness starts at 25 :D awsome chord progression...
but why should it end like that...extend it more...

can you take look at mine? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1217896

10-29-2009, 05:25 AM
Thanks guys I've pushed it to 5:30 and will probs do more. I will get around to each of your guys songs when my Internet Is back I'm stealing some ATM. I appreciate the kind words dudes it means a lot! I've started recording so I'll create a myspace and start artwork and shiz, thanks to helping me kick it off the ground! Again I will get around to each of your guys songs!

10-30-2009, 04:30 PM
Holy ****ing shit. That was awesome. Nothing bad to say about this. Purely epic.

c4c? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1223479

10-30-2009, 05:53 PM

just pure ****ing awesome...

seriously, the only thing I can say about this is that it needs more, a whole lot ****ing more :haha

But is this a song on itself, or is it more of a prelude for an epic song that follows?
because if it would be a song on itself, I think it needs more put into it, think like solo's and interludes and calm parts and heavier parts etc etc..

but if it is a prelude, then the following song must be freaking epic ;)

The only other thing I can say is that the end needs more lower notes, like lower strings, powerchords on distorted guitar on the lower strings, bass or something like that, at least that's what I think, but it sounds great either way...

anyways, care to take a look at a little piece of mine, it's not long only 2 minutes or something, and I don't require a long crit, just some feedback whether you liked it :)


10-30-2009, 07:57 PM
Brutal man. Keep up the good work.
maybe make it a bit longer. Add a bridge in there. A guitar solo would sound cool.

10-30-2009, 09:53 PM
This has epic written all over it. Pure pump up music. You did a real good job on it and the thumping rhythm of the strings, chorus, and brass really give it that dramatic feeling. My only complaint is that it is too short. Now if this is an intro or prelude, like said above, it would be perfect. But as a song itself, it needs to develop more. You got the introduction down tight, now go somewhere with it!

Crit mine?