(GP5/GP4) Some kind of intro?

[faiksener]

This is my first intro im working on and i need your idea/criticism :D

Cool? :rolleyes:

Boring? :confused:

[Heath843]

sounds good but a some rhythem in the back with a little distortion would make it better

[21Fretter]

Enjoyed it a lot. Didn't like the final Eminor though

Def carry on working on it.

[faiksener]

cool :D then ill carry on with a riff

[sammo_boi]

you could keep that same thing repeated once more and do an acoustic solo over it. i think it should stay acoustic for as long as possible, like nothing else matters. only the solo is distorted.

[faiksener]

Done, now i need to fix a solo

[Purves]

I really quite liked this. :D

The tempo was good and everything sounded quite steady, obviously an actual recording would kick buttocks but it's still good.

And just as a bit of opinion, I don't think you could go wrong with something like a small acoustic solo, you know, just a small part if anything. Just an opinion though feel free to ignore it! :cool:

[tume]

:)

[Plaeghdraeger]

that reminded me of some Blind Guardian songs :) Very cool stuff!

[faiksener]

I was influenced my Blind Guardian and Metallica :D

[zetto129]

sound great but i think that in part:

e||-----------------------------------|-----------------------|
B||-----------5--5--6--5h-6p-5--------|-----------3----5------|
G||--7-------------------------7--(7)-|--5--------------------|
D||-----7-----------------------------|-----5-----------------|
A||--5-----5--------------------------|--3-----3--------------|
E||-----------------------------------|-----------------------|


it sounds better and rhytmic when you use triolas:

|--3--| (3 sixteenth note)
E||-------------------------------|-----------------------|
B||-----------5--5--6--5h-6p-5----|-----------3----5------|
G||--7-------------------------7--|--5--------------------|
D||-----7-------------------------|-----5-----------------|
A||--5-----5----------------------|--3-----3--------------|
E||-------------------------------|-----------------------|


try it :)

but i like it much :)

[faiksener]

ok i fixed that part and now it sounds better, i just need an acoustic solo, and im working on it.