(GP5/GP4) Some kind of intro?


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faiksener
10-22-2009, 05:33 PM
This is my first intro im working on and i need your idea/criticism :D

Cool? :rolleyes:

Boring? :confused:

Heath843
10-22-2009, 05:42 PM
sounds good but a some rhythem in the back with a little distortion would make it better

21Fretter
10-22-2009, 05:55 PM
Enjoyed it a lot. Didn't like the final Eminor though

Def carry on working on it.

faiksener
10-22-2009, 06:01 PM
cool :D then ill carry on with a riff

sammo_boi
10-22-2009, 06:02 PM
you could keep that same thing repeated once more and do an acoustic solo over it. i think it should stay acoustic for as long as possible, like nothing else matters. only the solo is distorted.

faiksener
10-23-2009, 02:15 PM
Done, now i need to fix a solo

Purves
10-25-2009, 06:57 AM
I really quite liked this. :D

The tempo was good and everything sounded quite steady, obviously an actual recording would kick buttocks but it's still good.

And just as a bit of opinion, I don't think you could go wrong with something like a small acoustic solo, you know, just a small part if anything. Just an opinion though feel free to ignore it! :cool:

tume
10-25-2009, 07:54 AM
:)

Plaeghdraeger
10-25-2009, 09:57 AM
that reminded me of some Blind Guardian songs :) Very cool stuff!

faiksener
10-25-2009, 12:15 PM
I was influenced my Blind Guardian and Metallica :D

zetto129
10-25-2009, 12:22 PM
sound great but i think that in part:

e||-----------------------------------|-----------------------|
B||-----------5--5--6--5h-6p-5--------|-----------3----5------|
G||--7-------------------------7--(7)-|--5--------------------|
D||-----7-----------------------------|-----5-----------------|
A||--5-----5--------------------------|--3-----3--------------|
E||-----------------------------------|-----------------------|


it sounds better and rhytmic when you use triolas:

|--3--| (3 sixteenth note)
E||-------------------------------|-----------------------|
B||-----------5--5--6--5h-6p-5----|-----------3----5------|
G||--7-------------------------7--|--5--------------------|
D||-----7-------------------------|-----5-----------------|
A||--5-----5----------------------|--3-----3--------------|
E||-------------------------------|-----------------------|


try it :)

but i like it much :)

faiksener
10-25-2009, 12:39 PM
ok i fixed that part and now it sounds better, i just need an acoustic solo, and im working on it.