Epic Rock Ballad [gp5/midi] unfinished

[-Flooow]

Hey guys.

It's been a while since I posted some music.
Well, my creativity seemed to have a blast today and I
started writing an epic rock balladesque-song.

It includes the piano, guitars and of course bass'n drum.

What do you think of it so far ?
Tips etc. are appreciated, of course.

C&C , if you like. ;D


Midi-Data:click here (http://uploaded.to/file/saiz3j)


Cheers, Flo.

[forza21]

I didn't like the lead guitar as I found it a bit too whiney and the transition seemed... pointless?

The piano intro was very nice though; can you actually play it?

[-Flooow]

well .. as I depicted it as unfinished, there is no Transition since I couldn't find
something suitable yet.

and I can't play the piano and I don't have a bloody clue of music theory and stuff ;D
so basically, all I do on the piano is .. well .. kinda random for I really no nothing
about music theory and what sounds good , you know, I just hope it turns out good. :p