Metalcore intro


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Toph Rulez D00d
10-27-2009, 05:08 PM
This is a song I was working on a while ago, I kind of forgot about it but just listened to it the other day and I think it's pretty cool. It's on the intro though, I'll need to write some more for it after I get some other opinions on it.

Don't focus to much on the drums, I just put them in there for the basic idea of what I want to them be like, that's not what they are really going to be.

Mr. Parker
10-27-2009, 05:14 PM
The intro got old after 3 bars, shorten it up and would sound better to my ears.

10-27-2009, 06:39 PM
some of the harmony just did not work,
work on finding a rhythm part that would weave in with that riff better,
decent riff though!