soft metal riff i made (check it out and tell me what you think)


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candyheart
10-27-2009, 10:54 PM
made this riff and would like some feedback on what you think. posted it in some other forums, and never got the advice i was looking for. thanks.

on electric, add some reverb and treble. pick slowly.

E|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
B|--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
G|-----------0------------------0------------------0------------------2-------
D|-----2--------2--------0--------0--------0--------0----------0-------0-----
A|--0-----0--------0--3----3--------3--------0--------0--0------0-------0--
E|-----------------------------------------3-------------------------------------


what can i do to make it sound better? :confused:

jsoros
10-27-2009, 10:59 PM
fill in some of the 0's about 3/4 of the way in. try using 1 and 3 on D somewhere in there

candyheart
10-28-2009, 03:10 PM
fill in some of the 0's about 3/4 of the way in. try using 1 and 3 on D somewhere in there

could you tab it for me so i could see what you mean please? the 0's is what makes it sound together id say .