Salt Water C4C

[blake1221]

New song I wrote, what do you guys think?

Edit: Use the file ultimate-slash posted!

[frankibo]

I think it doesn't work. GP errors.

[blake1221]

Weak. My guitarist has the same problem. If you want to try it, try copy and pasting everything onto a new song, and then play it that way. I think that's what the guitarist does to get the ones I send him to work.

[frankibo]

Yeah that worked.

It was kinda like poppy post-hardcore, i actually really enjoyed it. Some nice lead parts, all in all it was very nice to listen to.
Acoustic bits were nice as well and the breakdown bit was cool as well.
All in all it was good, some nice catchy vocal melodies would really make this song fantastic.

[ultimate-slash]

I copied everything into a new file and just saved it that way. I reckon people are able to view it now.

[blake1221]

Thank you ultimate-slash!

Frankibo, thanks a lot. When I get it recorded, I'll send you the song if you want to hear the finished product. I'm pretty proud of it!

[Fatt Sorum]

Thanks for the crit mate

It's great to see some sick as guitar harmonies in the verse, I absolutely love them. The clean sections are tasteful and well written, very enjoyable. Chorus is just great, and leads into the next section really well.

POST HARDCORE BREAKDOWN WAS PERFECT. I love you.

Overall this is a great song, 8/10

[TehDutchDude]

Intro was quite cool, and the riff after that was done really well.

The clean section after that sounded a bit strange to me though.... not my style.

I liked the part after that, with the bass guitar pretty much making the most noise. You don't hear that too often and it's nice and refreshing.

The part after that was awesome, the acoustics fitted in really well. Loved it!

All in all, nice job :)

C4C?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1304039