Work in progress, tech/prog metalcore?


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aCloudConnected
05-13-2010, 11:56 PM
I've started working on this today, after listening to The Human Abstract's Nocturnal for most of the day. I'd like some feedback on what I have so far, and I'm not entirely sure if the harmonies are playable or not, I put them in after I put in what I had written. I'm leaving the drums up to my drummer, but I have some now just so it doesn't sound so empty.

Muchos gracias, live long and prosper.

hildesaw
05-14-2010, 02:50 AM
That was pretty sweet. I really liked the middle riff area, especially when the harmony comes in at 17. I think it would be sweet to some chugs in behind the two guitars. It would be a good way to fill it out a little, a you could find a nice groove to use later in the song.

Could you take a look at the song i just put up? http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1313083