heres my 1st try at a song


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05-19-2010, 04:25 AM
This is still a work in progress, but im hoping there might be sumthing here that I can work with, so if you guys got any ideas at how i can make it better let me know. thanx

05-19-2010, 08:23 PM
The rythm in bar 3 throws me off a bit but other than that pretty good. I liked the part at bar 25.