simply put (done for my semi music class band) [gp5/mid]


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lolometer1
09-08-2010, 04:51 PM
Ok i wrote this for my semi band that i've just started doing things with, i say semi band because essentially, it's my music class minus 2 people. Anyway here it is i feel like the ending drags on a bit and i'm gonna mix that up a bit in a minute

fancypants1
09-08-2010, 05:00 PM
that must of took a long to write

lolometer1
09-09-2010, 12:57 PM
sarcasm? if not it only took me a few hours, i work fast when it comes to instruments

MobiuZ
09-09-2010, 02:05 PM
hey man , great song , i like it

allthough it is really repetetive , and imo it really misses a lead guitar or melody te keep it interesting , cuz right now its just the same thing over and over.

and bar 47 till 54 could really use some variation as well

all in all you have good ideas , and it cinda gave me a maiden feel , but you gotta put an extra layer in there imo , that would make it a lot better.

Anyway can you crit The Age of War for me ? its in my sig.