I Smoked Dutch Weed with my Godbrother-in-Law (gp5)


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Amuro Jay
09-14-2010, 04:24 PM
Working title. But hey. I'll come up with a better one when I'm done writing the song.

Anyway, this is some weird kinda indie influenced rock song. Has a weird main riff to it which becomes a recurring theme throughout the song.

I need help in deciding what comes after the second verse. Should I go into another chorus or a bridge or what?

C4C (although it may take a while to get back to you, school's a bitch)

EDIT: Also, thanks in advance :cheers:

NemX162
09-14-2010, 04:35 PM
I like it. Personally, I would go with another chorus (maybe even repeat it) then to the bridge. However that's kind of done-to-death. You could always do the bridge like you said, it would take people by surprise.

UntoExistence
09-14-2010, 04:58 PM
i think a bridge would be good next. sounds good so far dude.

Kergash
09-14-2010, 05:19 PM
LOVED the chorus. Seriously, just loved it. The second verse was also very cool, but the chorus man. Oh sweet jesus, it was awesome.

Amuro Jay
09-15-2010, 11:12 AM
So, question regarding the chorus. Should the vocal melody in the chorus stay as the vocal melody or should I take that melody and have keyboards play it and have the vocals follow a simpler melody?

wannabe_punk
09-17-2010, 12:23 AM
imo simpler vocal melodies for the chorus are great, because it makes it easier for the audience to participate