Loool! Some Metalcore and Deathcore. Haters Gonna Hate


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Drapte
09-16-2010, 01:31 PM
Hey guys.

Hows it going, 3 songs I wrote.

Probs gonna release the metalcore ones with my band.

The deathcore one I made for some mad friend I have who does the most crazy drawings check out this!! He does this in MS PAINT!!! sometimes adds abit of photoshop

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs034.ash2/35052_429489028248_695568248_4490451_6525357_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs315.ash2/59585_449510553248_695568248_4959513_1614467_n.jpg

http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash2/hs107.ash2/38670_436133393248_695568248_4658822_6313229_n.jpg
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t0m_r0cks
09-16-2010, 01:51 PM
lol by any chance are you deathscout8 on youtube? :)

basiccore is pretty sick, especially that early breakdown and the acoustic part :D

the intro for revolution is pretty immense as well as the bridge section it blew me away :P

Drapte
09-16-2010, 02:08 PM
:o Yes I am xD

Thanks heaps for your positive feedback :)

Ginsu
09-16-2010, 05:04 PM
Basiccore:
I very much enjoyed the intro, usually this sort of thing gets old fast, yours stayed interesting. The drum fill at 20 got me really pumped for an awesome breakdown. The breakdown was rather promising...but it was REALLY LONG, and kinda bored me after a while. The riff after that was my second favorite...but that, again, was REALLY LONG. I was expecting maybe four times through the riff...I got six. And the harmonizing didn't do much. The riff after it was AMAZING, my favorite, BUT, the last Minor 3rd there...it's a C Minor if I'm right, and it works great. The SECOND time, I think it should go UP to an F Minor, so the last note of the riff is slightly different every other time...it does wonders in making it sound less repetitive. I very much liked the riff at 122 as well, and I have no complaints for it. The acoustic part was kinda iffy transitioning in...and almost random-seeming when it changed back into the riff at 154. Finally, the last open chord sounds...weird drawn out for four measures. One was good enough, I think. Overall...7/10. I'd give an 8, but some riffs were dragged out to the point where it was kinda like "Ok, this is a great riff...but how much longer am I gonna get beat over the head with it?". So yeah, the BIGGEST problem is the repetition. C4C?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1362345

Drapte
09-19-2010, 10:56 AM
Basiccore:
I very much enjoyed the intro, usually this sort of thing gets old fast, yours stayed interesting. The drum fill at 20 got me really pumped for an awesome breakdown. The breakdown was rather promising...but it was REALLY LONG, and kinda bored me after a while. The riff after that was my second favorite...but that, again, was REALLY LONG. I was expecting maybe four times through the riff...I got six. And the harmonizing didn't do much. The riff after it was AMAZING, my favorite, BUT, the last Minor 3rd there...it's a C Minor if I'm right, and it works great. The SECOND time, I think it should go UP to an F Minor, so the last note of the riff is slightly different every other time...it does wonders in making it sound less repetitive. I very much liked the riff at 122 as well, and I have no complaints for it. The acoustic part was kinda iffy transitioning in...and almost random-seeming when it changed back into the riff at 154. Finally, the last open chord sounds...weird drawn out for four measures. One was good enough, I think. Overall...7/10. I'd give an 8, but some riffs were dragged out to the point where it was kinda like "Ok, this is a great riff...but how much longer am I gonna get beat over the head with it?". So yeah, the BIGGEST problem is the repetition. C4C?
http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1362345


Thanks for the crit.

blancoisgod
09-19-2010, 11:24 AM
torrr was sick.

needs a solo though.

Drapte
09-19-2010, 10:09 PM
torrr was sick.

needs a solo though.

Where exactly I can try add one

-tempest-
09-24-2010, 04:55 AM
torr was your best but i can't really enjoy them because i compare all metal core to ABRs thrill seeker..