Wake (melodic metal/metalcore)


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jackblackyeah17
09-21-2010, 09:46 PM
This is a piece I have been working on a bit lately, not really sure where to take it from here. Basically came up with the main riff when messing around with 5/4 time, and I was wondering if it sounds natural enough. Will C4C.

P.S. Drums suck

Veil Of Osiris
09-22-2010, 01:21 AM
I thought Intro 1 was a bit boring, but Intro 2 was awesome, it flowed very well. Verse was good. And the prechorus kind of comes out of no where, but if you fix the drums, so that it's china-china-snare-china then it sounds good.

slayerfrk
09-22-2010, 11:02 PM
sounds like parkway drive shenanigans. it was good until the breakdown though

-tempest-
09-24-2010, 02:36 AM
i liked it. after that ending riff take your intro 2 and repeat it with some variation. maybe throw some odd times or something. just get creative and see where that takes you