World's End (Gp5, Gp4, midi) Epic
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09-22-2010, 01:23 PM
World's End is an intro to my band's EP. It's old but I think it's fairly good. I am open to crits and comments. Enjoy ! :)
09-22-2010, 01:30 PM
It's very repetative, basically you just make rhythm... and keep adding more rhythm over it on other instruments. Also, it could have been much more epic than it is now.
09-22-2010, 01:34 PM
yes, repetitive...dont worry, if you listen to my mp3's on my profile i have the same problem...it's a gnarly progression don't get me wrong, but you and i? we get caught up in that gnarly progression and don't take it anywhere....TAKE IT SOMEWHERE!
09-22-2010, 01:36 PM
I think, it's a very good intro, very simple to play, but it sounds great.
But, if it was my intro, I will add a slowly powerful solo, with echo maybe. Think about it)
09-22-2010, 02:04 PM
Finish it, add textures and forget those drums pls.
09-22-2010, 02:10 PM
hey man you got some good idea's and it felt pretty epic , but ... like the others said , its repetetive and the only thing that changes is the orchestra , anyway i edited your leads at some sections and made it a little more dynamic , hope you dont take it offensive.
o yeah , this has potential , good luck !
could you crit The Age of War for me ? its in my sig.
09-22-2010, 03:21 PM
Pretty boring, too repetitive and generic in my opinion.
09-22-2010, 06:08 PM
I don't think it's boring or repetitive. Genric yes, but I thought it was quite nice intro. I think it was good.
09-23-2010, 12:28 AM
Thanks for your comments guys but I don't give a *** about the ''repetitiveness'' lol. I know it is and I won't change anything, but it's fun to hear what you think about it. I made this like 2 years ago and I ''improved'' a lot. I'll update a few new songs later.
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