World's End (Gp5, Gp4, midi) Epic


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Paradox_Empire7
09-22-2010, 01:23 PM
World's End is an intro to my band's EP. It's old but I think it's fairly good. I am open to crits and comments. Enjoy ! :)

Zeletros
09-22-2010, 01:30 PM
It's very repetative, basically you just make rhythm... and keep adding more rhythm over it on other instruments. Also, it could have been much more epic than it is now.

tjbhdeath squad
09-22-2010, 01:34 PM
yes, repetitive...dont worry, if you listen to my mp3's on my profile i have the same problem...it's a gnarly progression don't get me wrong, but you and i? we get caught up in that gnarly progression and don't take it anywhere....TAKE IT SOMEWHERE!

Frank_2022
09-22-2010, 01:36 PM
I think, it's a very good intro, very simple to play, but it sounds great.
But, if it was my intro, I will add a slowly powerful solo, with echo maybe. Think about it)

imaginary.frnd
09-22-2010, 02:04 PM
Finish it, add textures and forget those drums pls.

MobiuZ
09-22-2010, 02:10 PM
hey man you got some good idea's and it felt pretty epic , but ... like the others said , its repetetive and the only thing that changes is the orchestra , anyway i edited your leads at some sections and made it a little more dynamic , hope you dont take it offensive.

o yeah , this has potential , good luck !

could you crit The Age of War for me ? its in my sig.

Simon Blackwing
09-22-2010, 03:21 PM
Pretty boring, too repetitive and generic in my opinion.

xbitmetal
09-22-2010, 06:08 PM
I don't think it's boring or repetitive. Genric yes, but I thought it was quite nice intro. I think it was good.

Paradox_Empire7
09-23-2010, 12:28 AM
Thanks for your comments guys but I don't give a *** about the ''repetitiveness'' lol. I know it is and I won't change anything, but it's fun to hear what you think about it. I made this like 2 years ago and I ''improved'' a lot. I'll update a few new songs later.