Acoustic Song[WIP GP5/4/Midi]


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10-06-2010, 05:31 PM
I decided to do something different than writing a metal song and try writing a happy sounding acoustic song. I would like some tips for transitions or anything really. If you want I can C4C.


10-06-2010, 05:39 PM
-I like the intro, one thing id change about it though is the strings instead of playing the same chord within the same octave play the same chord but somewhere else upon the fretboard. It will achieve a bigger and overall better sound i think. Still not a big deal though.

I like the repeat of the chords and the lead line is good. Again if you wanted to mix it up you could play the same chord somewhere else.

-Chorus same as intro


10-07-2010, 04:54 PM
well i must say i enjoyed that very much

Allthough its very short , i didnt hear anything i didnt like , allthough the drums seem to be a little overwhelming the rest of the sound , you might want to try to add some ghost notes to the cymbals to balance it out more , other than that i really liked it , good job !

Could you crit Ride Forever Free for me ? its in my sig.