Intro (Progressive Metal, GP5) C4C


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deathbycontrol
10-11-2010, 08:21 PM
I just wanted to see what you all think about what I have so far. Its the first time I've tried to write something for the piano, so I'd like some feedback on that.

I think I've got an idea for a follow up riff, but I wanted to know how what I have now is.

C4C :).

jackblackyeah17
10-12-2010, 06:11 PM
The first part was good, the second one was ok, but the note chices felt a bit random.

I think that after bar 16 it would be cool if it went into a techy, distorted type riff, although I would like the hear what you had in mind.