Metalcore song (Gp5 Gp4 midi) C4C


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PLUCK
10-12-2010, 05:51 AM
Found this while looking through my computer. Had a lot of fun making this but I'm not sure about all the transitions - the random slide before the breakdown etc. Would be fun to know what others think about the riffs and what I could improve! :)

Dio10101
10-12-2010, 06:36 AM
Cool stuff, but the end bit(which i assume to be a chorus) felt like it would have been better going half as long then going back into something fast and heavy.

ibz120
10-12-2010, 03:25 PM
I really like the "chorus" riff. I think the way the "pre-chorus" part leads to the chorus, makes it feel like the chorus is the part before the actual chorus (if that makes any sense.. lol). I would try to work on transitions between parts, and the dynamics of them :P.