"This City" And Lyrics [*.gp5/*.gp4/*.mid]


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defiance64
10-12-2010, 06:37 PM
Crit4Crit as usual. I read the responses during school. PLEASE! Send me a personal message with a link to your post when you want me to crit back, because I can't listen during school, then I forget. lol. I get a email in my inbox when you guys send me a personal message. So then I CAN'T forget.

Lyrics:

Every day I wake to these
Shattered hopes and dreams.
This whole town holds me down.
While I am perishing.
I realize there's nothing left for me
There's not even memories.
And the one love lost is one too many.
I can't explain how much I hate this city.

And every day
I say to myself
That's one day less
In this living hell.
And every night
When I lay in bed.
I cry myself to sleep
(If I can sleep with)
All this in my head.

I can't run away.
I have to stay.
I can't run away.

Step away from behind this shroud.
I'm finally ready to let it all out.
I'm hiding like a screaming child.
I need to be away for a while.

Pull myself from out of this gap.
I think I could do better than this.
I'll run away forever. (forever)
Me and myself, my friend.

(I'm tired of)
Holding everything inside me.
Until it breaks me down eventually.
If I could materialize it all.
It would probably break my fall
(And keep me safe)
Holding everything in my hands
Really isn't as easy as it seems
I could probably get away from pain
If I could get away from this city.

Step away from behind this shroud.
I'm finally ready to let it all out.
I'm hiding like a screaming child.
I need to be away for a while.

Don't ever look back.
(I won't ever look back.)
It will only hold you down.
(It will only hold me down.)
It won't ever make you laugh.
(Won't ever, never.)
Run away from this town. (Away from this life)
(I'll run away forever.)

I'm picking up the pieces
That slowly fell apart
I'm picking up the pieces
That slowly fell apart
I'm picking up the pieces
That slowly fell apart
I'm picking up the pieces
(Pause) These pieces...of my heart.

Of my heart...
(Of my heart...) [x4]

I never survived.
Because you sent me drowning.
In the water inside
These walls you built up around me. [x2]

Don't ever look back.
It will only hold you down.

slayerfrk
10-12-2010, 06:48 PM
i like the lyrics but i feel they dont match with the song in some points lol.
the part i like the most is the melody of the chorus. but the part at bar 34 was to dissonant for me :( i like dissonant but only when songs are all about that. if that makes sense. the soft section was nice i enjoyed that quite a bit also. the synth ending breakdown was quite chill i thought it was pimpin.